Ugh, stabbing incidents are getting way too common 
... I mean, can't we all just talk it out like civilized people? Anyway, back to the layout... have you seen how this article's formatted? It's so clunky! They need to break up those long blocks of text with some white space, add some subheadings, and use bullet points where possible. This would make it way easier to read and understand. I mean, who reads that much detail about the suspect's info? Can't they just focus on the victim's story instead? 
... I mean, can't we all just talk it out like civilized people? Anyway, back to the layout... have you seen how this article's formatted? It's so clunky! They need to break up those long blocks of text with some white space, add some subheadings, and use bullet points where possible. This would make it way easier to read and understand. I mean, who reads that much detail about the suspect's info? Can't they just focus on the victim's story instead? 
... a woman trying to break up the fight only to get stabbed to death? it's just heartbreaking 
. and what's even more infuriating is that her boyfriend isn't facing any charges 
. justice seems like it's not being served here 
. we need to make sure that all parties involved are held accountable for their actions 
.
I mean, a guy goes crazy on a woman who just tried to break up the fight between him and his GF? 
Like what even is that? And to make it worse, his BF gets off scot-free? 